Fiction 55: His Love


My bloggie is really happy. Dear all, I proudly present the Fiction 55 Queen, Shruti, of Hits and Misses. I can hear whistles and claps already. Yeah this girl is unbeatable when it comes to fiction, whether it is Fiction 55 or short story writing. Her way of narrating stories makes them even more interesting and usually, her stories carry a moral at the end, which makes them worth reading. She also happens to be a sweetie-pie, who has become one of my really great friends in blogosphere. She is one of the most popular writers and has a huge fan following (I am proud to be one of them). Add her blog to your must-read blogs list and surely you will enjoy reading it. Thanks a lot Shruti for such a great Fiction 55. After reading the terrible ones written by me earlier, I am sure you guys will appreciate a great Fiction 55, from the queen herself :)

Wikipedia says β€œ55 Fiction is a form of microfiction that refers to the works of fiction limited to a maximum of fifty-five words.”


She was there, right before his eyes, gleaming in white.
She was hot.
He loved her and felt excited to see her.
The moment he thought about her, he experienced chemical changes in his stomach.
He went and laid his hands on her.
Being a coolie, its a rare thing that he eats Rice.

With Love,


33 thoughts on “Fiction 55: His Love

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  1. What an intro you gave me girl!! Am already beaming here!! *hugs*
    Am lost for words as usual!!

    And thanks a bunch for allowing me to write in your blog! πŸ™‚

    Love ya girlie πŸ™‚


    1. Hey rohitha, thanks a bunch! πŸ˜€
      Actually this has 2 facets! U understood a single facet-funny, the other part is a serious one! A coolie, without food.


  2. Wowwww………Bang.
    Shruti back to form….
    diz is what i wanna read from you…
    you did it again…
    fantabulous….. innomaginative..
    grt work….
    most suitable for our telangaana farmers…
    keep leaping… πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

    bunch of cheers from the stands….
    mahi πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚


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