Fiction 55: His Love

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My bloggie is really happy. Dear all, I proudly present the Fiction 55 Queen, Shruti, of Hits and Misses. I can hear whistles and claps already. Yeah this girl is unbeatable when it comes to fiction, whether it is Fiction 55 or short story writing. Her way of narrating stories makes them even more interesting and usually, her stories carry a moral at the end, which makes them worth reading. She also happens to be a sweetie-pie, who has become one of my really great friends in blogosphere. She is one of the most popular writers and has a huge fan following (I am proud to be one of them). Add her blog to your must-read blogs list and surely you will enjoy reading it. Thanks a lot Shruti for such a great Fiction 55. After reading the terrible ones written by me earlier, I am sure you guys will appreciate a great Fiction 55, from the queen herself :)

Wikipedia says β€œ55 Fiction is a form of microfiction that refers to the works of fiction limited to a maximum of fifty-five words.”

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HIS LOVE
She was there, right before his eyes, gleaming in white.
She was hot.
He loved her and felt excited to see her.
The moment he thought about her, he experienced chemical changes in his stomach.
He went and laid his hands on her.
Being a coolie, its a rare thing that he eats Rice.


With Love,

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33 Comments Add yours

  1. Shruti says:

    What an intro you gave me girl!! Am already beaming here!! *hugs*
    Am lost for words as usual!!

    And thanks a bunch for allowing me to write in your blog! πŸ™‚

    Love ya girlie πŸ™‚

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    1. Thanks a lotttt for the great 55er girlie πŸ™‚ *hugs* you are the sweetest πŸ™‚

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  2. Titaxy says:

    good one πŸ™‚

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  3. lostworld says:

    Shruti rocks as usual !!!! So right about all that you’ve mentioned.

    Story had me laughing.. rice of all the things!! πŸ˜€

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    1. Shruti says:

      Hey rohitha, thanks a bunch! πŸ˜€
      Actually this has 2 facets! U understood a single facet-funny, the other part is a serious one! A coolie, without food.

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  4. gils says:

    !!! WOOWWWW…watta twist!! loved it..surutti rocks πŸ™‚

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    1. Shruti says:

      Thank you gils πŸ™‚

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  5. Sandhya says:

    This is the correct ’55er’ story. For a coolie, rice is important and he will feel like the way Shruthi has explained. Thanks Shruthi and Ashwini! Nice read.

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    1. Shruti says:

      Hi sandhya, You understood it correctly!! You are welcome and thank you for dropping by!

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    1. Shruti says:

      Hi vishesh,
      It happens πŸ˜›

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  6. Swaram says:

    Ha ha ha … most unexpected πŸ˜› Gud one Shru πŸ˜‰

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    1. Shruti says:

      Thanks swaram πŸ˜€

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  7. Arvee says:

    Whoa…RICE?!?!? T_T
    loved the twist in the end. You rock, shruti….gotta see your blog. Buhbye!

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    1. Shruti says:

      Arvee, Hi πŸ™‚
      Thank you! Hope to cya around in my blog too!

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  8. Wowwww………Bang.
    Shruti back to form….
    diz is what i wanna read from you…
    you did it again…
    soooooooooooparu……..
    fantabulous….. innomaginative..
    grt work….
    most suitable for our telangaana farmers…
    keep leaping… πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

    bunch of cheers from the stands….
    mahi πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

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    1. Shruti says:

      Thank you mahi!!

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  9. Miss_Nobody says:

    wow that was awesome,or what!way to go shruti!

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  10. kanagu says:

    nice one Shruti… πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

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  11. SiD says:

    Yup…she is crowned the princess of Fiction 55 …:D

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    1. Shruti says:

      Ahem ahem..Thanks sidhu bhai πŸ˜€

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  12. Neha says:

    hmm, nice twist..

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    1. Shruti says:

      Thank u dev πŸ™‚

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  13. raj says:

    see shruti. i told you. you cook up delicious curry. πŸ˜›

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  14. raj says:

    She was there, right before his eyes, gleaming in white.
    She was hot.

    tsk tsk…women being compared to rice. πŸ˜›
    i kinda like that.

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  15. Naveen says:

    did not expect that ….. something one can expect from 55-word fiction queen πŸ˜›

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