My bloggie is really happy. Dear all, I proudly present the Fiction 55 Queen, Shruti, of Hits and Misses. I can hear whistles and claps already. Yeah this girl is unbeatable when it comes to fiction, whether it is Fiction 55 or short story writing. Her way of narrating stories makes them even more interesting and usually, her stories carry a moral at the end, which makes them worth reading. She also happens to be a sweetie-pie, who has become one of my really great friends in blogosphere. She is one of the most popular writers and has a huge fan following (I am proud to be one of them). Add her blog to your must-read blogs list and surely you will enjoy reading it. Thanks a lot Shruti for such a great Fiction 55. After reading the terrible ones written by me earlier, I am sure you guys will appreciate a great Fiction 55, from the queen herself
Wikipedia says “55 Fiction is a form of microfiction that refers to the works of fiction limited to a maximum of fifty-five words.”
HIS LOVE
She was there, right before his eyes, gleaming in white.
She was hot.
He loved her and felt excited to see her.
The moment he thought about her, he experienced chemical changes in his stomach.
He went and laid his hands on her.
Being a coolie, its a rare thing that he eats Rice.
With Love,
What an intro you gave me girl!! Am already beaming here!! *hugs*
Am lost for words as usual!!
And thanks a bunch for allowing me to write in your blog! 🙂
Love ya girlie 🙂
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Thanks a lotttt for the great 55er girlie 🙂 *hugs* you are the sweetest 🙂
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good one 🙂
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Thank you!
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Thank you!!
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Shruti rocks as usual !!!! So right about all that you’ve mentioned.
Story had me laughing.. rice of all the things!! 😀
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Hey rohitha, thanks a bunch! 😀
Actually this has 2 facets! U understood a single facet-funny, the other part is a serious one! A coolie, without food.
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!!! WOOWWWW…watta twist!! loved it..surutti rocks 🙂
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Thank you gils 🙂
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This is the correct ’55er’ story. For a coolie, rice is important and he will feel like the way Shruthi has explained. Thanks Shruthi and Ashwini! Nice read.
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Hi sandhya, You understood it correctly!! You are welcome and thank you for dropping by!
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ha ha..got mislead..
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Hi vishesh,
It happens 😛
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Ha ha ha … most unexpected 😛 Gud one Shru 😉
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Thanks swaram 😀
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Whoa…RICE?!?!? T_T
loved the twist in the end. You rock, shruti….gotta see your blog. Buhbye!
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Arvee, Hi 🙂
Thank you! Hope to cya around in my blog too!
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Wowwww………Bang.
Shruti back to form….
diz is what i wanna read from you…
you did it again…
soooooooooooparu……..
fantabulous….. innomaginative..
grt work….
most suitable for our telangaana farmers…
keep leaping… 🙂 🙂 🙂
bunch of cheers from the stands….
mahi 🙂 🙂 🙂
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Thank you mahi!!
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wow that was awesome,or what!way to go shruti!
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Thanks sweety!
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nice one Shruti… 🙂 🙂
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Thank u kanagu!
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Yup…she is crowned the princess of Fiction 55 …:D
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Ahem ahem..Thanks sidhu bhai 😀
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hmm, nice twist..
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Hmm..Ty
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Nice One….
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Thank u dev 🙂
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You have an award girlie,come pick it up!
http://ssg1990.blogspot.com/2009/12/just-so-that-you-im-honestreally.html
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see shruti. i told you. you cook up delicious curry. 😛
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She was there, right before his eyes, gleaming in white.
She was hot.
tsk tsk…women being compared to rice. 😛
i kinda like that.
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did not expect that ….. something one can expect from 55-word fiction queen 😛
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